Talk:Bolster Rivet Press

Mentor Comments from 5/14/14

 * Page description:
 * Good page description. The second sentence may need some proofreading though. Should be easy to make it a complete sentence.


 * Problem Statement:
 * Change the name of this section to Design Task
 * Subsections of the Design Task would be:
 * Background
 * Project Goals
 * Design Specifications


 * Design:
 * Parts table looks clean and the descriptions are clear.
 * The link for photo of the silicon case appears to be broken.


 * Consider adding another level 3 subsection after Parts titled Final Design.
 * Show the parts assembled into the final product with a photo or detailed drawing.


 * Testing:
 * Good explanation of test apparatus and key factors that you identified during the design process
 * Consider moving 'Charts' to it's own level 2 section after Testing called Results.


 * Meet the Team:
 * Everyone please edit your team member bios to be in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".
 * Use Luke's as an example.


 * Documents:
 * Create a level 2 heading named Documents
 * Design Documents and References would both be level 3 subsections of Documents.

Page looks good overall. These changes shouldn't take much time at all.

Jonathan Teske (talk) 23:26, 15 May 2014 (UTC)