Talk:Orchard Picker Positioning Platform

Mentor comments for 5/19/14

 * Introduction:
 * Design Task might be a more informative title for this section.
 * Good description of project background, project learning, and design specifications.
 * These three areas could be separated into different level 3 subsections under Introduction.


 * Main Design Areas:
 * Nice work identifying the specific aspects of the project that will be necessary for the final design.


 * Future Work:
 * This section could make use of bullet lists to keep the information organized and easy to read.


 * Group Members:
 * The biography sections should all be written in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".


 * Document Archives
 * All the required documentation is included.
 * Be sure to include any other design documents necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. Solidworks Files, Math Models, etc)

Jonathan Teske (talk) 20:18, 19 May 2014 (UTC)