Talk:High Tunnel Green House

Mentor comments for 5/16/14

 * Page Description:
 * Description is short but to the point and it does a good job explaining the need for the project.
 * You may want to move the Sponsor to the gray information box on the right side of the page. The sponsor logo and information would fit well there.


 * Problem Statement :
 * Change Problem Statement to Design Task
 * Design Goals should go under this section as a level 3 header
 * Specifications should follow as a separate level 3 header
 * Deliverables can round out the section
 * Move Interview with Tony MaCammon to a new level 3 subsection called Project Learning under the level 2 header Design Concept Developement.


 * Design Concept Development:
 * Create another level 3 header titled Project Learning
 * You can put the section Interview with Tony McCammon in this section.
 * Follow the Project Learning subsection with the other parts of the Design Concept Development section.
 * Initial Phase
 * Design Phase
 * Final Phase


 * Design Data:
 * This section looks fantastic.
 * Very nice use of CFD analysis and structural analysis in your design.


 * Final Design:
 * Good use of a variety engineering analysis methods to facilitate the design process and support your final design.


 * Stand Your Ground Team:
 * Please edit your biographies to be in 3rd person. No "I" or My".


 * Design Documents:
 * Looks good, you have all the main items required.
 * Please upload any other documentation that you have necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. EES or Matlab Code, Experiment Results, SolidWorks Models, etc).