Talk:High Tunnel Green House

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Mentor comments for 5/16/14[edit source]

Page Description
  • Description is short but to the point and it does a good job explaining the need for the project.
  • You may want to move the Sponsor to the gray information box on the right side of the page. The sponsor logo and information would fit well there.


Problem Statement
  • Change Problem Statement to Design Task
  • Design Goals should go under this section as a level 3 header
  • Specifications should follow as a separate level 3 header
  • Deliverables can round out the section
  • Move Interview with Tony MaCammon to a new level 3 subsection called Project Learning under the level 2 header Design Concept Developement.


Design Concept Development
  • Create another level 3 header titled Project Learning
  • You can put the section Interview with Tony McCammon in this section.
  • Follow the Project Learning subsection with the other parts of the Design Concept Development section.
    • Initial Phase
    • Design Phase
    • Final Phase


Design Data
  • This section looks fantastic.
  • Very nice use of CFD analysis and structural analysis in your design.


Final Design
  • Good use of a variety engineering analysis methods to facilitate the design process and support your final design.


Stand Your Ground Team
  • Please edit your biographies to be in 3rd person. No "I" or My".


Design Documents
  • Looks good, you have all the main items required.
  • Please upload any other documentation that you have necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. EES or Matlab Code, Experiment Results, SolidWorks Models, etc).