Talk:Bolster Rivet Press

Mentor Comments from 5/14/14

Page description

• Good page description. The second sentence may need some proofreading though. Should be easy to make it a complete sentence.

Problem Statement

• Change the name of this section to Design Task
• Subsections of the Design Task would be:
  • Background
  • Project Goals
  • Design Specifications

Design

• Parts table looks clean and the descriptions are clear.
  • The link for photo of the silicon case appears to be broken.

• Consider adding another level 3 subsection after Parts titled Final Design.
  • Show the parts assembled into the final product with a photo or detailed drawing.

Testing

• Good explanation of test apparatus and key factors that you identified during the design process
• Consider moving 'Charts' to it's own level 2 section after Testing called Results.

Meet the Team

• Everyone please edit your team member bios to be in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".
• Use Luke's as an example.

Documents

• Create a level 2 heading named Documents
• Design Documents and References would both be level 3 subsections of Documents.

Page looks good overall. These changes shouldn't take much time at all.

Jonathan Teske (talk) 23:26, 15 May 2014 (UTC)