Talk:Orchard Picker Positioning Platform

Mentor comments for 5/19/14

Introduction

• Design Task might be a more informative title for this section.
• Good description of project background, project learning, and design specifications.
• These three areas could be separated into different level 3 subsections under Introduction.

Main Design Areas

• Nice work identifying the specific aspects of the project that will be necessary for the final design.

Future Work

• This section could make use of bullet lists to keep the information organized and easy to read.

Group Members

• The biography sections should all be written in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".

Document Archives

• All the required documentation is included.
• Be sure to include any other design documents necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. Solidworks Files, Math Models, etc)

Jonathan Teske (talk) 20:18, 19 May 2014 (UTC)