Talk:High Tunnel Green House
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Mentor comments for 5/16/14[edit source]
- Page Description
- Description is short but to the point and it does a good job explaining the need for the project.
- You may want to move the Sponsor to the gray information box on the right side of the page. The sponsor logo and information would fit well there.
Problem Statement
- Change
Problem Statementto Design Task - Design Goals should go under this section as a level 3 header
- Specifications should follow as a separate level 3 header
- Deliverables can round out the section
- Move Interview with Tony MaCammon to a new level 3 subsection called Project Learning under the level 2 header Design Concept Developement.
- Design Concept Development
- Create another level 3 header titled Project Learning
- You can put the section Interview with Tony McCammon in this section.
- Follow the Project Learning subsection with the other parts of the Design Concept Development section.
- Initial Phase
- Design Phase
- Final Phase
- Design Data
- This section looks fantastic.
- Very nice use of CFD analysis and structural analysis in your design.
- Final Design
- Good use of a variety engineering analysis methods to facilitate the design process and support your final design.
- Stand Your Ground Team
- Please edit your biographies to be in 3rd person. No "I" or My".
- Design Documents
- Looks good, you have all the main items required.
- Please upload any other documentation that you have necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. EES or Matlab Code, Experiment Results, SolidWorks Models, etc).