Talk:Bolster Rivet Press

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Mentor Comments from 5/14/14[edit source]

Page description
  • Good page description. The second sentence may need some proofreading though. Should be easy to make it a complete sentence.


Problem Statement
  • Change the name of this section to Design Task
  • Subsections of the Design Task would be:
    • Background
    • Project Goals
    • Design Specifications


Design
  • Parts table looks clean and the descriptions are clear.
    • The link for photo of the silicon case appears to be broken.
  • Consider adding another level 3 subsection after Parts titled Final Design.
    • Show the parts assembled into the final product with a photo or detailed drawing.


Testing
  • Good explanation of test apparatus and key factors that you identified during the design process
  • Consider moving 'Charts' to it's own level 2 section after Testing called Results.


Meet the Team
  • Everyone please edit your team member bios to be in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".
  • Use Luke's as an example.


Documents
  • Create a level 2 heading named Documents
  • Design Documents and References would both be level 3 subsections of Documents.


Page looks good overall. These changes shouldn't take much time at all.

Jonathan Teske (talk) 23:26, 15 May 2014 (UTC)