Talk:Orchard Picker Positioning Platform

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Mentor comments for 5/19/14[edit source]

Introduction
  • Design Task might be a more informative title for this section.
  • Good description of project background, project learning, and design specifications.
  • These three areas could be separated into different level 3 subsections under Introduction.


Main Design Areas
  • Nice work identifying the specific aspects of the project that will be necessary for the final design.


Future Work
  • This section could make use of bullet lists to keep the information organized and easy to read.


Group Members
  • The biography sections should all be written in 3rd person. No "I" or "My".


Document Archives
  • All the required documentation is included.
  • Be sure to include any other design documents necessary to make your work reproducible (i.e. Solidworks Files, Math Models, etc)

Jonathan Teske (talk) 20:18, 19 May 2014 (UTC)